ChatGPT Summary of a Short Story

Thomas Balzac
3 min readMay 17, 2023

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Balzac’s home in Treme’ outside the French Quarter, New Orleans

Me: “Here are some fiction story fragments I created. Can you rewrite them into the form of a short story with an interesting ending, please?” ChatGPT: “Certainly! Please provide me with the fiction story fragments, and I’ll do my best to rewrite them…”:

“Once upon a time, there was an aging composer named Balzac. He had once been a promising talent in the Off Broadway music scene, with his opera “Sodom” gaining popularity. However, when he attempted to compose a sequel, the interest and acclaim had faded away.

As the years passed, Balzac became increasingly aware of his own mortality. The realization of his advancing age, coupled with recent health issues, made him confront the limited time he had left — perhaps only 10 or 20 years at best. Despite his desires, he couldn’t escape the fact that his body was aging, and his days were numbered.

One thing that both amused and troubled Balzac was his longing for companionship. At his age, he still fantasized about having a wife or live-in girlfriend, although he felt he had no time for love. Love had eluded him for over six decades, but he did admit to having a deep love for music. Music was his true companion, unbound by the constraints of time & age.

Yet, Balzac found himself grappling with jealousy, an emotion he never thought he would experience at this stage in his life. He couldn’t help but feel a sense of anger and grief over a woman, despite acknowledging that she was nearly 50 years old. The irony of a 70-plus-year-old man pining after a 50-year-old woman was not lost on him. Financial limitations prevented him from pursuing a meaningful relationship, and he questioned the practicality of sharing his life with someone, even though he craved intellectual and physical connections.

As time went on, Balzac’s health continued to decline. His eyesight deteriorated, making it difficult for him to read the sheet music he so passionately studied. The cracks in his surroundings mirrored the cracks within him, symbolizing the failures and disappointments of his life. Balzac was living among rats — both literally and figuratively. The rodents had taken refuge in his Florida shack, and he couldn’t bear the thought of sharing his living space with them.

The presence of these rats, once seen as cuddly creatures he had fed beneath his kitchen sink, had transformed into a nightmare. Balzac’s attempts to trap and relocate them had failed, and he feared his life would end with his body being consumed by the very creatures he had tried to befriend. The loathing and disgust he felt towards the rats pushed him to consider drastic measures, including thoughts of suicide. He refused to become one with the rats, both physically and mentally.

Despite his despair, Balzac clung to his passion for music. He continued to compose, even with failing vision, pouring his emotions and hopes into the notes on the page. His music was his refuge, a way to escape the grim reality that surrounded him.

As Balzac listened to a radio program discussing various issues, he found solace in the words of others. The discussions about jobs, education, and the challenges faced by people resonated with him. Balzac, who had experienced his share of struggles, understood the complexities of life and the need for perseverance.

In that moment, Balzac realized that he didn’t want to die just yet. He pleaded with the powers above for ten more years, acknowledging that his faith might be undefined, but his desire to live and create was undeniable.

And so, the old composer continued to write music, finding purpose and meaning in each note he played. The story of Balzac, the aging musician, became one of resilience and a refusal to let go of his passion, even in the face of adversity. The ending of his tale remained unwritten, for Balzac was determined to keep composing until his last breath, defying the limitations that age and circumstances tried to impose on him.

Regenerate response

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